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How to Write GOD-LEVEL First Lines
>> Personalize your cold emails
>> Get a 15%+ reply rate
Close clients with fucking EASE
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>> Personalize your cold emails
>> Get a 15%+ reply rate
Close clients with fucking EASE
**a sneak preview into my new course dropping Tuesday with @blackhatwizardd
**// A THREAD BOMB
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to kill it with Cold Email or LinkedIn outreach
Your First Lines need to be great
- Bad first lines: 2% reply rate
- Top-notch first lines: 15%+ reply rate
It's simple
Write great first lines, book sales calls EASY
Few calls I booked using God-Level First Lines techniques
Your First Lines need to be great
- Bad first lines: 2% reply rate
- Top-notch first lines: 15%+ reply rate
It's simple
Write great first lines, book sales calls EASY
Few calls I booked using God-Level First Lines techniques
HOW DO I WRITE FIRST LINES?
1) Research your prospect THOROUGHLY: LinkedIn, their company site, podcast they were on - find a piece of info
2) State where you found this info
3) Make a GENUINE, DEEP compliment about a piece of info you found
It's that easy
1) Research your prospect THOROUGHLY: LinkedIn, their company site, podcast they were on - find a piece of info
2) State where you found this info
3) Make a GENUINE, DEEP compliment about a piece of info you found
It's that easy
EXAMPLES OF GOD-LEVEL FIRST LINES (1/2)
1) your Searching trailers you helped supe are epic - that movie was ahead of it's time.
2) the new look of Hamill Galleries' site is so eye-catching - big fan of the Wheel of Fortune landing page, it really pops.
1) your Searching trailers you helped supe are epic - that movie was ahead of it's time.
2) the new look of Hamill Galleries' site is so eye-catching - big fan of the Wheel of Fortune landing page, it really pops.
MORE EXAMPLES (2/2)
3) your 'You Vs. Usain' ad campaign was so fun & eye-catching - you more than deserved that Campaign of the Year award, congrats!
4) your LinkedIn post about discovering purpose in life hit home for me - finding my purpose made me happy & motivated.
3) your 'You Vs. Usain' ad campaign was so fun & eye-catching - you more than deserved that Campaign of the Year award, congrats!
4) your LinkedIn post about discovering purpose in life hit home for me - finding my purpose made me happy & motivated.
EXTRA TIPS (1/2)
- Cut filler words: that, those, very, really maybe, absolutely, definitely, the
- Reference Case Studies as much as possible... they're great to give compliments to & are very specific
- Proof-read your First Line out loud 2-3x when you're done writing
- Cut filler words: that, those, very, really maybe, absolutely, definitely, the
- Reference Case Studies as much as possible... they're great to give compliments to & are very specific
- Proof-read your First Line out loud 2-3x when you're done writing
EXTRA TIPS (2/2)
- Don't make comments about shallow things like how long someone has been in an industry, a college they went to, how many endorsements they have on LinkedIn, etc.
- Limit exclamation point usage... only use when they fit & not more than 1 per line
- Don't make comments about shallow things like how long someone has been in an industry, a college they went to, how many endorsements they have on LinkedIn, etc.
- Limit exclamation point usage... only use when they fit & not more than 1 per line
If you want to
- effortlessly train your first-line freelancer
- get $20/hr-quality first lines written for $6/hr
- actually book meetings & make real $$ thru cold email & LinkedIn
Get your hands on God-Level First Lines
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- effortlessly train your first-line freelancer
- get $20/hr-quality first lines written for $6/hr
- actually book meetings & make real $$ thru cold email & LinkedIn
Get your hands on God-Level First Lines
DROPPING TOMORROW
$97
price going up to $127 QUICK
