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10 TOP-NOTCH Personalized First Lines
>> Train Your Copywriters with These
>> Do B2B Outreach (Email or LinkedIn)
>> Book Meetings & Get Clients
Let's do it.
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>> Train Your Copywriters with These
>> Do B2B Outreach (Email or LinkedIn)
>> Book Meetings & Get Clients
Let's do it.
// A SHORT THREAD
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Personalized First Lines
Are THE most crucial part
Of initial B2B Outreach messages
Shitty first line - 3-4% reply rate
GREAT first line - 15%+ reply rate
LET'S GET INTO IT.
Are THE most crucial part
Of initial B2B Outreach messages
Shitty first line - 3-4% reply rate
GREAT first line - 15%+ reply rate
LET'S GET INTO IT.
1) tripling growth in lead volume for Delve is wild - it was smart to scrap their landing pages, sometimes you need to start fresh.
2) loved what you said about leaders leading by example in Forbes - every great leader does that.
2) loved what you said about leaders leading by example in Forbes - every great leader does that.
3) how you got 500k quizzes done through OwnYourADHD makes me feel good - lots of lives changed!
4) loved your YouTube Ad of the Year - I've always thought masculinity had a different meaning to everybody.
4) loved your YouTube Ad of the Year - I've always thought masculinity had a different meaning to everybody.
5) doubling Vienna Beef's revenue is no joke - I'm such a fan of their beef sticks, SO GOOD.
6) your work with the AMF was so important! My brother suffers from migraines, & he loved how much awareness y'all brought to the issue.
6) your work with the AMF was so important! My brother suffers from migraines, & he loved how much awareness y'all brought to the issue.
7) growing http://Tastings.com into the biggest adult-drink site in the world is huge - really helped me pick out a good wine for the in-laws!
8) the new look of Hamill Galleries' site is so eye-catching - big fan of the Wheel of Fortune landing page, it really pops.
8) the new look of Hamill Galleries' site is so eye-catching - big fan of the Wheel of Fortune landing page, it really pops.
9) gotta agree with your LinkedIn post, helping people is the best part of marketing - how have you seen your work change lives?
10) bumping Hard Core's sales up 500% is no joke - I never knew bird hunting had that big of a market.
10) bumping Hard Core's sales up 500% is no joke - I never knew bird hunting had that big of a market.
Use this thread as a tool to judge your copywriters
If your First Lines aren't on this level, your Reply Rate suffers
Shitty reply rate --> no meetings booked --> you'll stay broke
Thread on HOW TO WRITE first lines coming soon
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If your First Lines aren't on this level, your Reply Rate suffers
Shitty reply rate --> no meetings booked --> you'll stay broke
Thread on HOW TO WRITE first lines coming soon
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