For people interested in how plot-style comics writing works, you can find Roger Stern’s plot for “The Kid Who Collects Spider-Man” here, along with Ron Frenz’s pencils. So you can see what Ron got, what he drew, what he changed, etc. https://tombrevoort.com/2020/12/24/making-the-kid-who-collects-spider-man/
My plots break the story down further, into pages and even panels, but the artist is not required to make the same choices I did. Just so long as they tell the story well and leave room for appropriate captions and dialogue and all.
…and here’s what @BenjaminDewey did with that.
On that fourth page, I just realized — in the plot, I said Attuma came “sliding down feet first,” which was a typo — I meant “gliding.”
So when Ben had him athletically sliding down a steep incline, I thought, “Wow, that’s really cool! I only suggested he was swimming…"
So when Ben had him athletically sliding down a steep incline, I thought, “Wow, that’s really cool! I only suggested he was swimming…"
But it turns out to have been unintentionally-collaborative!
Secrets of the comics revealed.
Secrets of the comics revealed.