So i said in my tweet thread earlier that i was going to deconstruct this tweet and say why i think this is a bad leading tweet so let's bloody do that.

So i started off with the subject which is fine except immediately i don't mention the game by name which makes it ambiguous

what I'm actually talking about really because I think there's a decent chance people don't know what I'm talking about. Now yes i did say Naughty Dog but that's still not clear enough really.

2ndly i sounded way too angry with it especially the last part

That last part also isn't clear at all what's the 'needless shit'? See i knew but that's not good enough 3rdly i asked 2 questions and they're both pointless because i said later on in the thread why so it's rhetorical for no reason.

4thly this tweet doesn't work with the rest of my thread(s) it's not close to being what my later 2nd thread is about when i was clarifying because of how poor it is.

5thly i said i can't deal with it despite saying i muted the things so i don't actually see it

that makes not a lot of sense thinking about it.

Anyways it's important to look at tweets i made and deconstruct them to see what's actually being said because a lot of my threads feel unrelated but in this case it's not done well at all because of that.

I think it's important when i do an important thread to actually do it in a way that works and not make it unrelated.

i hope this was a fun thread to read because it was interesting to do quickly