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''Dream hasn’t come back.''
AND THEN HE DOES JHJGYTFRDSEAETSRYDTFUJGUHOJ
You starting with a built-up situation happening ALWAYS gets me off guard! GOD i need classes with Cross on how to be fUCKING ALERT TO DANGER ALL TH TIME
AND THEN HE DOES JHJGYTFRDSEAETSRYDTFUJGUHOJ
You starting with a built-up situation happening ALWAYS gets me off guard! GOD i need classes with Cross on how to be fUCKING ALERT TO DANGER ALL TH TIME
''just enough to bar both Cross and Error from reentry'' Noot is salty about Error too and i love it! You add details and then you remember about them later!
THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME YOU KNOW!
Cross better stay invisible for a couple centuries XD
THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME YOU KNOW!
Cross better stay invisible for a couple centuries XD
''He doesn’t like to call it hope''
WELL GUESS WHAT NIGHTMARE?!
IT IS!
And the fact that hE JUST FELT THE OPPOSITE TO HIS NATURE because he loves Dream single-handed killed me!
They changed a lot after the incident but now that they're together they're changing EVEN MORE
WELL GUESS WHAT NIGHTMARE?!
IT IS!
And the fact that hE JUST FELT THE OPPOSITE TO HIS NATURE because he loves Dream single-handed killed me!
They changed a lot after the incident but now that they're together they're changing EVEN MORE
''Nightmare finds consoling glances thrown his way'' This single detail here got me so sad!
They all liked Dream's presence there! Dream made Nightmare feel reachable for his boys and they were happy about it! They're all sad that he left and this is so heart warming
They all liked Dream's presence there! Dream made Nightmare feel reachable for his boys and they were happy about it! They're all sad that he left and this is so heart warming
''It’s bad enough to hear Killer deliberating on how to deal with Cross'' Killer is fUCKING HURT
The boy needs a hug ASAP! Oh i want SO BAD to see Killer on all this situation right now! The feelingless bastard shedding a tear of hurt and betrayal? THAT'S MY JAM AND I DEMAND IT
The boy needs a hug ASAP! Oh i want SO BAD to see Killer on all this situation right now! The feelingless bastard shedding a tear of hurt and betrayal? THAT'S MY JAM AND I DEMAND IT
''He’s always embodied far more negativity than his brother could match'' I'm surprised neither Dream nor Nightmare though about it yet! like, They're putting SO MUCH EFFORT into finally having each other that they're ignoring their own well beings and this is sad
''who hadn’t been around his brother so casually for centuries'' Also good point! Again, They changed a lot alone! And both of them still need to realize that!
They're there for each other, yes, but still, there's way too much to get in terms with
They're there for each other, yes, but still, there's way too much to get in terms with
''Dream was simply..keeping the balance'' Please don't even let me get started on that!
A pendulum works this way. The more you push it, the harder it comes back! But it takes time for it to draw a whole circle on the nether! Both sides need to work together! Light and Darkness
A pendulum works this way. The more you push it, the harder it comes back! But it takes time for it to draw a whole circle on the nether! Both sides need to work together! Light and Darkness
''Dream is the reason things have become so lively in the castle'' YES!
They all felt that difference, they all slowly slipped into this warm embrace that Dream seems to have, not only Nightmare or Killer, but Dust and Horror.
Childs of violence meeting their first kindness
They all felt that difference, they all slowly slipped into this warm embrace that Dream seems to have, not only Nightmare or Killer, but Dust and Horror.
Childs of violence meeting their first kindness
''But so what?'' Yes Nightmare, so what?! Are you going to fucking let him do this ALONE?! Are you not fucking listening the pendulum thing?
BALANCE DOESN'T HAVE ONLY ONE SIDE
JHGTFDRTYFUYGIHUYGTFDYFUYGIUHOIJK
DON'T 'SO WHAT' ME OLD MAN
BALANCE DOESN'T HAVE ONLY ONE SIDE
JHGTFDRTYFUYGIHUYGTFDYFUYGIUHOIJK
DON'T 'SO WHAT' ME OLD MAN
''It’s not like Dream was going anywhere'' Well Nightmare i have bad news for you
LIFE IS A BOX OF SURPRISES
LIFE IS A BOX OF SURPRISES
''and that maybe he squandered the one chance they had at reconciliation'' This is painful to read! I feel so bad for them
TYPE THIS IS TORTURE GFRDESRTDYTFUYGIUHOJKLÇ
TYPE THIS IS TORTURE GFRDESRTDYTFUYGIUHOJKLÇ
“You lied to me,” i swear i screamed at this part and my sister beside me almost fell from the bed hgfdtdyfugiuhjk
It was in this moment i knew, i was fucked up.
From here my Sanity said bye and moved to Canada
It was in this moment i knew, i was fucked up.
From here my Sanity said bye and moved to Canada
''meeting Dream’s fierce dual eyelights'' Here i was immediatelly like ''Oh yeah he's angry''
The way their emotions are portrayed from this point got me in tears!
i mean, HOLY FUCKING SHIT YOU MADE MECRY SO FUCKING HARD
I can hear the spite on Dream's words, the anger, the sad
The way their emotions are portrayed from this point got me in tears!
i mean, HOLY FUCKING SHIT YOU MADE MECRY SO FUCKING HARD
I can hear the spite on Dream's words, the anger, the sad
“You’ve chosen to return, I see.” AND THEN HE GETS SAD CAUSE DREAM GOT ANGRY
NIGHTMARE YOU HAVE CHOOSEN WORDS BETTER BACK IN THE DAY HGFDTYFUYGIUHJK
The despair starting at this point i can't---
NIGHTMARE YOU HAVE CHOOSEN WORDS BETTER BACK IN THE DAY HGFDTYFUYGIUHJK
The despair starting at this point i can't---
'''He’s quickly growing soaked'' 
oh wait not yet
Damn it rain
oh wait not yet
Damn it rain
“I trusted you, Nightmare!'' ouch.
Dream is so clearly hurt don't even let me get started on how good you wrote their feelings!
I felt the sting of his words for Nightmare and i was IN TEARS
I tried to but i could not hold back and started crying (again)
Dream is so clearly hurt don't even let me get started on how good you wrote their feelings!
I felt the sting of his words for Nightmare and i was IN TEARS
I tried to but i could not hold back and started crying (again)
''I believed in you, Night! I-I thought you’d changed…” They punctuation, the words choosen, the pauses.
It's so well written and so good! You did such an amazing job on that! I don't have enough words dude! holy shit!
It's so well written and so good! You did such an amazing job on that! I don't have enough words dude! holy shit!
“You mean your defenseless big brother? Your scapegoat?'' Now that stings! But it's good! They're finally talking about it and it's amazing! They really do need to talk it out!
'' I asked, and I asked, and I asked, but all you ever did was lie to me—!” True. Again, balanced is two-sided, bridges are two-sided. Yet, i know fear can build walls instead.
The emphasis on certain words was done so nicely! I can't-- This is so good T^T
The emphasis on certain words was done so nicely! I can't-- This is so good T^T
“Were you really so stupid that you couldn’t piece things together, Dream?'' Also true! But again, it's two-sided! Neither of them tried! Nightmare was too afraid to tell Dream he needed help and Dream was too afraid it would change and pull him out of his comfort zone.
“It’s always Dream, Dream, Dream.” You simp for him too Nightmare, shut up!
''his brother takes out the bow strapped to his back'' I screamed here too :D
I physically panicked, afraid for Nightmare's and Dream's life, cause i know both aren't in a very good situation to fight! Dream is still weaker and Nightmare is just dEPRESSED
I physically panicked, afraid for Nightmare's and Dream's life, cause i know both aren't in a very good situation to fight! Dream is still weaker and Nightmare is just dEPRESSED
''A Brief Collection of Nightmare’s Trauma: Starring Dream.” i'm sorry i laughed at that uhygtfrdtdryfghj
But i can totally see from where it came from! This building up feeling that Dream was better than him, bigger than him and more loved than him. This poisonous despair
But i can totally see from where it came from! This building up feeling that Dream was better than him, bigger than him and more loved than him. This poisonous despair
''I spent an inordinate amount of time not quite sure where the darkness ended and I began'' This is ultimate despair.
The amount of sheer pain and suffering it takes to finally accept that this darkness, this evil, and the rotten thing is you. The determination on it
The amount of sheer pain and suffering it takes to finally accept that this darkness, this evil, and the rotten thing is you. The determination on it
“I’m so sick and tired of dealing with this same bullshit for four hundred fucking years.” Valid, they're pushing and pushing it. Avoiding this needed talk for so long. Of course he would be tired! They could sit down and talk but NOOO LET ME TRY TO KILL MY BROTHER AGAIN :'D
''Nightmare watches the relic shrink and disappears into the darkness'' Aw man that's so sad, while i really hope they find it again, i also hope it gets lost forever!
A first step to let go of the past and look at the future!
A first step to let go of the past and look at the future!
''With this hope and joy that I couldn’t get rid of'' This right here
The amount of pain on this single piece is terrifying!
Being forever locked in only one state is a curse! As good as being happy all the time sounds, it is destructive to not be able to ingest your pain
The amount of pain on this single piece is terrifying!
Being forever locked in only one state is a curse! As good as being happy all the time sounds, it is destructive to not be able to ingest your pain
“I lost you, Night (....) But I couldn’t shed a single tear''
Dream is aware of the fact he craves Nightmare's presence on his life, he's aware of the pain losing him caused to his soul. And being that painfully aware of grief but being unable to properly feel it....
Dream is aware of the fact he craves Nightmare's presence on his life, he's aware of the pain losing him caused to his soul. And being that painfully aware of grief but being unable to properly feel it....
''You can’t actually expect me to believe you’d throw away the life you built to go back to our closed off world and a single tree to our name.” nIGHTMARE PLEASE!
PLEASE I BEG YOU
JUST LET IT END DAMN IT!
My heart can't take this pushing T^T
PLEASE I BEG YOU
JUST LET IT END DAMN IT!
My heart can't take this pushing T^T
''With a yell, he charges at Nightmare'' I just imagine Nightmare yelling and running away and i can't read this part without laughing vgfdsfgdfghljk The way it plays in my head is so funny imma draw it later
“Enough,” Nightmare growls, patience worn thin.'' Fucking finally asshole. And then he just tACKLES DREAM DOWN LIKE DUDE HOLD ON CALM DOWN YOU'RE GOING TO BREAK HIM HOLY SHIT
''He surges forward, knocking his mouth against Dream’s, kissing him hard'' Now it's happening
''There’s a streak of lightning out the corner of his vision'' Nevermind..... at this point i almost forgot they were IN THE RAIN OUTSIDE IN THE MUD DURING A THUNDERSTORM!
''but the sheer terror in Dream’s eyelights is far blown, unseeing.'' Oh shit, oh fuck
At this point i knew nothing good was about to happen.
As i said, fear builds walls and sometimes they're harder to break than we think
At this point i knew nothing good was about to happen.
As i said, fear builds walls and sometimes they're harder to break than we think
''Dream turns heel and runs straight into the forest, leaving Nightmare staring after him in shock.'' dO'NT JUST--STAND THERE! GO AFTER HIM MORON! OH MY GOD
“Shit,” Nightmare whispers, and then races after his brother, into the darkness.'' AND THAT'S THE END OF IT
It made me so angry but at the same time
CLIFF HANGER BABY HELL YEAH
I can't fucking wait to see more of it
But please take your time ówò
gOD THAT WAS AWESOME I---
It made me so angry but at the same time
CLIFF HANGER BABY HELL YEAH
I can't fucking wait to see more of it
But please take your time ówò
gOD THAT WAS AWESOME I---
*Deep breath* Ok i'm good!
Gosh, Type this was such a master piece! Just as expected, you did a wonderful job with this chapter! You got me to laugh, to 7w7, to cry and to get angry in a single chapter and LORD what a trip!
Your writing is SO PERFECT!
Gosh, Type this was such a master piece! Just as expected, you did a wonderful job with this chapter! You got me to laugh, to 7w7, to cry and to get angry in a single chapter and LORD what a trip!
Your writing is SO PERFECT!
I am so sorry for the spam, i just really needed to express it! God I'm still trembling gfdrseretdyfughj
Go check it out if you don't know what I'm talking about!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/27588355/chapters/68135548
Thank you for coming to my ted talk! ^w^ I apologize for the spam again!
Sorry!
Go check it out if you don't know what I'm talking about!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/27588355/chapters/68135548
Thank you for coming to my ted talk! ^w^ I apologize for the spam again!
Sorry!
