Was looking at copywriting examples and ended up visiting login pages of a few sites we rarely visit anymore since auto-login.
For most, the copy is simple and to the point (how it should be). They tell you what's in it for you and that's it. No cute stuff.
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For most, the copy is simple and to the point (how it should be). They tell you what's in it for you and that's it. No cute stuff.
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Facebook - Facebook helps you connect and share with the people in your life
Answers the Q in your mind about what you can do with FB. They obvi do a lot more but they stick to their essence (connecting & sharing) without complicating matters (like they did with the product)
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Answers the Q in your mind about what you can do with FB. They obvi do a lot more but they stick to their essence (connecting & sharing) without complicating matters (like they did with the product)
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Whatsapp
Simple. Secure. Reliable messaging.
Looks like the stress is more on 'we are about trust' than 'we are about messaging' (with the words 'secure' and 'reliable')
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Simple. Secure. Reliable messaging.
Looks like the stress is more on 'we are about trust' than 'we are about messaging' (with the words 'secure' and 'reliable')
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Twitter
See what’s happening in the world right now
Apart from Twitter being my favorite social product, it also bags my favorite copy award.
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See what’s happening in the world right now
Apart from Twitter being my favorite social product, it also bags my favorite copy award.
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Instagram - *nothing*
This was interesting. I don't know the reason behind why Insta chose not to keep any copy. Maybe their phone screenshots do the talking since they are about pics?
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This was interesting. I don't know the reason behind why Insta chose not to keep any copy. Maybe their phone screenshots do the talking since they are about pics?
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Reddit - The front page of the internet
Felt this was a bit cute. Or maybe I am missing a cultural reference. Not exactly hitting the nail on 'what does Reddit do for me'. Liked the second sentence more "Reddit is a network of communities based on people's interests."
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Felt this was a bit cute. Or maybe I am missing a cultural reference. Not exactly hitting the nail on 'what does Reddit do for me'. Liked the second sentence more "Reddit is a network of communities based on people's interests."
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Linkedin - Welcome to your professional community
Again, felt this was a bit too high level. Could have included some action verbs around what I can do on Linkedin. Any reason why they went with this?
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Again, felt this was a bit too high level. Could have included some action verbs around what I can do on Linkedin. Any reason why they went with this?
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