It’s one of the greatest axioms of writing ....
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The larger the scale of what you’re trying to portray...
The smaller you go.
So if you’re trying to show a world with out people. .
You don’t show the globe ...
So if you’re trying to show a world with out people. .
You don’t show the globe ...
You show a bike so abruptly and recently abandoned...
The tires are still spinning.
The tires are still spinning.
Playground equipment
Still swaying
From little occupants that were there but a moment ago...
Still swaying
From little occupants that were there but a moment ago...
You show a stroller ...
Loving festooned...
... empty
Without a soul in sight.
Loving festooned...
... empty
Without a soul in sight.
That’s how ...
You bring the pain crashing down on your heroes shoulders...
Show him all the little things ...
He failed to save.
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You bring the pain crashing down on your heroes shoulders...
Show him all the little things ...
He failed to save.
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Yes. I see the typo
