It’s one of the greatest axioms of writing ....

https://sasquatchandleatherjacket.tumblr.com/post/634061361377378304
The larger the scale of what you’re trying to portray...
The smaller you go.

So if you’re trying to show a world with out people. .

You don’t show the globe ...
You show a bike so abruptly and recently abandoned...

The tires are still spinning.
Playground equipment

Still swaying

From little occupants that were there but a moment ago...
You show a stroller ...

Loving festooned...

... empty

Without a soul in sight.
That’s how ...

You bring the pain crashing down on your heroes shoulders...

Show him all the little things ...

He failed to save.

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