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OK I’m gonna draw in a bit but I’m… thinking about modern #xicheng au with author lxc and editor jc who don’t meet face to face until half a year into their partnership. Might actually write this later but, for now, thread below
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1. LXC is a distinguished author who has published numerous novels and won dozens of prestigious literary awards. He masterfully writes a diverse range of genres from modern lit to sci-fi to historical fiction.
1. LXC is a distinguished author who has published numerous novels and won dozens of prestigious literary awards. He masterfully writes a diverse range of genres from modern lit to sci-fi to historical fiction.
2. His prose is uniquely poetic and evocative, his writing artistic yet empathetic, and his works are praised by critics and the general public alike.
3.
Behind the lauded pen name is Lan Huan, 35 years old, an elegant, poised, gracious, and kind man, half-jokingly referred to within his social circle as the number 1 bachelor in the city. He tends to be rather private but is always willing to lend a sympathetic ear,
Behind the lauded pen name is Lan Huan, 35 years old, an elegant, poised, gracious, and kind man, half-jokingly referred to within his social circle as the number 1 bachelor in the city. He tends to be rather private but is always willing to lend a sympathetic ear,
4.
and when he does socialize his manners are impeccable.
It’s been nearly 2 years since he last published anything, which is strange because it’s widely known that he’s been working on a novel for 16 months now. It’s rare that the prolific LXC takes so long to finish a work.
and when he does socialize his manners are impeccable.
It’s been nearly 2 years since he last published anything, which is strange because it’s widely known that he’s been working on a novel for 16 months now. It’s rare that the prolific LXC takes so long to finish a work.
5.
Privately, LH is in what he supposes is a slump. He’s not certain since this sort of stagnation has never happened to him before, but those who know him, including his longtime editor, has informed him that he is indeed in a ‘slump’ and has ‘writer’s block.’
Privately, LH is in what he supposes is a slump. He’s not certain since this sort of stagnation has never happened to him before, but those who know him, including his longtime editor, has informed him that he is indeed in a ‘slump’ and has ‘writer’s block.’
6.
The reason? A massive, divisive fallout between his two dearest friends exactly a year ago, and the crumbling of the trio’s relationship thereafter. LH hasn’t been quite himself afterward. Even powering up his laptop or picking up a pen to write drains so much from him,
The reason? A massive, divisive fallout between his two dearest friends exactly a year ago, and the crumbling of the trio’s relationship thereafter. LH hasn’t been quite himself afterward. Even powering up his laptop or picking up a pen to write drains so much from him,
7.
and what he does manage to write leaves him dissatisfied and frustrated. Still, LH will finish this novel if it’s the last thing he does. (Sometimes, he thinks that that might be in the quite literal sense. He... tries not to think about that.)
and what he does manage to write leaves him dissatisfied and frustrated. Still, LH will finish this novel if it’s the last thing he does. (Sometimes, he thinks that that might be in the quite literal sense. He... tries not to think about that.)
8.
Unfortunately, his editor is leaving on extended maternity leave for at least a year. LH is happy for her, but also despondent. After all, she’s the one who has worked with him since the beginning of his career 13 years ago,
Unfortunately, his editor is leaving on extended maternity leave for at least a year. LH is happy for her, but also despondent. After all, she’s the one who has worked with him since the beginning of his career 13 years ago,
9.
helping him polish his material into the gems that they are. She reassures him that he has outstanding talent and will do fine in her absence. LH thinks she’s too humble; without her he feels lost… especially now, of all times.
helping him polish his material into the gems that they are. She reassures him that he has outstanding talent and will do fine in her absence. LH thinks she’s too humble; without her he feels lost… especially now, of all times.
10.
Fortunately, she is bringing in someone else as her substitute, a colleague whom she highly recommends. LH has never met this Jiang Wanyin, but his editor speaks incredibly highly of his skills and, of course, LH trusts her.
Fortunately, she is bringing in someone else as her substitute, a colleague whom she highly recommends. LH has never met this Jiang Wanyin, but his editor speaks incredibly highly of his skills and, of course, LH trusts her.
11.
LXC and JWY begin communication via email. He sends JWY his unfinished manuscript draft for him to get a sense of his current project, a historical fiction novel focusing on political drama and intrigue, the ending of which he hasn’t even decided yet.
LXC and JWY begin communication via email. He sends JWY his unfinished manuscript draft for him to get a sense of his current project, a historical fiction novel focusing on political drama and intrigue, the ending of which he hasn’t even decided yet.
12.
To his surprise, the annotated manuscript he receives back is… thorough, to say the least. This JWY doesn’t hold back any critique, of which there is many, and his words are blunt and to-the-point. But, LH is a professional and doesn’t take it personally.
To his surprise, the annotated manuscript he receives back is… thorough, to say the least. This JWY doesn’t hold back any critique, of which there is many, and his words are blunt and to-the-point. But, LH is a professional and doesn’t take it personally.
13.
Though the editor’s words are sharp, LH can tell that all his points are very valid and the product of a keen editor’s intuition and ability to draw connections from the work. What’s more, the man has an exceptional eye for detail,
Though the editor’s words are sharp, LH can tell that all his points are very valid and the product of a keen editor’s intuition and ability to draw connections from the work. What’s more, the man has an exceptional eye for detail,
14.
going above and beyond the usual level of revisionist editing, reaching almost the depth of focus as a line editor, even for something as rough as an incomplete draft.
going above and beyond the usual level of revisionist editing, reaching almost the depth of focus as a line editor, even for something as rough as an incomplete draft.
15.
And besides, even LH himself isn’t very satisfied with the current state of the manuscript— it’s why he hasn’t been able to make much progress on it in 16 months.
And besides, even LH himself isn’t very satisfied with the current state of the manuscript— it’s why he hasn’t been able to make much progress on it in 16 months.
16.
Plus, LH thinks to himself in amusement, after all that merciless stabbing, so to speak, of his draft, JWY ends with one last, small note, completely unlike all the others: ‘rough, but holds good promise.’
Plus, LH thinks to himself in amusement, after all that merciless stabbing, so to speak, of his draft, JWY ends with one last, small note, completely unlike all the others: ‘rough, but holds good promise.’
17.
...
JC is a little... shell-shocked when his senior and mentor informs him that she's going on maternity leave and handing over her author to him. Actually, that part is rather unsurprising;
...
JC is a little... shell-shocked when his senior and mentor informs him that she's going on maternity leave and handing over her author to him. Actually, that part is rather unsurprising;
18.
Actually, that part is rather unsurprising; what leaves him reeling is that the aforementioned author is one *Lan Xichen*, the esteemed author of whom JC has secretly been a massive fan for a decade.
Actually, that part is rather unsurprising; what leaves him reeling is that the aforementioned author is one *Lan Xichen*, the esteemed author of whom JC has secretly been a massive fan for a decade.
19.
Well, maybe it’s a not-so-secret obsession, because his mentor has a certain gleam in her eye when she tells him she’s sure JC will be able to understand and connect with LXC’s writing to help bring the work that the author is envisioning in his mind into reality.
Well, maybe it’s a not-so-secret obsession, because his mentor has a certain gleam in her eye when she tells him she’s sure JC will be able to understand and connect with LXC’s writing to help bring the work that the author is envisioning in his mind into reality.
20.
Well, if there’s anyone who gets LXC’s entire body of work, it’s JC since, well, he’s read all of it. Every single one. Of course he’s aware of the fact that LXC has been working on his current novel for an abnormally long time. And now, JC’s going to be his editor?
Well, if there’s anyone who gets LXC’s entire body of work, it’s JC since, well, he’s read all of it. Every single one. Of course he’s aware of the fact that LXC has been working on his current novel for an abnormally long time. And now, JC’s going to be his editor?
21.
'Jiang-xiansheng,
Good morning. I hope this correspondence finds you well. About the notes you sent yesterday— I appreciate the feedback. I confess that I have been struggling for some time with this particular manuscript and have been uncertain of how to proceed.
'Jiang-xiansheng,
Good morning. I hope this correspondence finds you well. About the notes you sent yesterday— I appreciate the feedback. I confess that I have been struggling for some time with this particular manuscript and have been uncertain of how to proceed.
22.
Your input was refreshing and duly noted. I wanted to ask for your opinion for the arc spanning chapters 7-10— do you think it would be better to move it earlier?
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LXC'
Your input was refreshing and duly noted. I wanted to ask for your opinion for the arc spanning chapters 7-10— do you think it would be better to move it earlier?
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LXC'
23.
'Lan-laoshi,
Honestly, those chapters felt superfluous in relation to the chapters around it. I'd eliminate them unless you plan on introducing a new character or complication, like you did in ch15-16. In comparison, ch11 felt too busy. Additionally…
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'Lan-laoshi,
Honestly, those chapters felt superfluous in relation to the chapters around it. I'd eliminate them unless you plan on introducing a new character or complication, like you did in ch15-16. In comparison, ch11 felt too busy. Additionally…
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...
24.
...
It's common for authors to get writer's blocks like this. As your editor, I am here for you to consult if you wish.
Feel free to call me by Jiang Wanyin.
JWY'
...
It's common for authors to get writer's blocks like this. As your editor, I am here for you to consult if you wish.
Feel free to call me by Jiang Wanyin.
JWY'
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'Jiang Wanyin,
Please address me by Lan Xichen as well. Laoshi is too lofty a title for me. Thank you again for your advice. I shall try what you've suggested.
'Jiang Wanyin,
Please address me by Lan Xichen as well. Laoshi is too lofty a title for me. Thank you again for your advice. I shall try what you've suggested.
26.
I'm afraid that I am inexperienced with dealing with writer's block. I would be honored to seek Jiang Wanyin's knowledgeable guidance with this matter.
LXC’
I'm afraid that I am inexperienced with dealing with writer's block. I would be honored to seek Jiang Wanyin's knowledgeable guidance with this matter.
LXC’
27.
'Lan Xichen,
You mean you've never had writer's block before? Lan-laoshi is truly a skilled author if so.
If Lan Xichen is having trouble with a piece of writing, I would recommend turning your mind elsewhere, maybe another project or pursuit.
'Lan Xichen,
You mean you've never had writer's block before? Lan-laoshi is truly a skilled author if so.
If Lan Xichen is having trouble with a piece of writing, I would recommend turning your mind elsewhere, maybe another project or pursuit.
28.
It may be trite advice but I’ve found it helpful for me personally.
JWY’
It may be trite advice but I’ve found it helpful for me personally.
JWY’
29.
'Jiang Wanyin,
I am undeserving of such high praise. In fact, I have been a poor author as of late.
Thank you for the advice. When it comes to advice, I find that triteness reflects efficacy. I shall make those revisions you recommended and reply back to you soon.
LXC'
'Jiang Wanyin,
I am undeserving of such high praise. In fact, I have been a poor author as of late.
Thank you for the advice. When it comes to advice, I find that triteness reflects efficacy. I shall make those revisions you recommended and reply back to you soon.
LXC'
30.
LXC was surprisingly down-to-earth and approachable, JC discovered. To be honest, he was relieved. A part of him had been worried that LXC would turn out to be arrogant or react poorly to JC’s critiques.
LXC was surprisingly down-to-earth and approachable, JC discovered. To be honest, he was relieved. A part of him had been worried that LXC would turn out to be arrogant or react poorly to JC’s critiques.
31.
JC had dealt with a few of *that* type of author in the past, who dared to call themselves ‘professionals’ despite not acting the part.
However, LXC wasn’t like that at all. He was humble and never failed to be open-minded to JC’s criticisms.
JC had dealt with a few of *that* type of author in the past, who dared to call themselves ‘professionals’ despite not acting the part.
However, LXC wasn’t like that at all. He was humble and never failed to be open-minded to JC’s criticisms.
32.
"Never meet your heroes"— JC was grateful that that idiom didn’t seem to apply to his case.
It had taken two full correspondences between them for the reality of the situation to truly sink in for JC.
"Never meet your heroes"— JC was grateful that that idiom didn’t seem to apply to his case.
It had taken two full correspondences between them for the reality of the situation to truly sink in for JC.
33.
He was actually working with his favorite author of all time. And, not only favorite, but one who had been so influential for him. Anyone would find it difficult to not be starstruck. But, JC prided himself on his professionalism.
He was actually working with his favorite author of all time. And, not only favorite, but one who had been so influential for him. Anyone would find it difficult to not be starstruck. But, JC prided himself on his professionalism.
34.
Roughly once a week, JC would receive an email from LXC in his work inbox regarding his novel, to which JC would dutifully reply as soon as he was able. The first time he’d read the manuscript, it had been in a rough shape, and his initial review had bluntly reflected that.
Roughly once a week, JC would receive an email from LXC in his work inbox regarding his novel, to which JC would dutifully reply as soon as he was able. The first time he’d read the manuscript, it had been in a rough shape, and his initial review had bluntly reflected that.
35.
Both he and LXC knew they had a lot of work ahead of them. But, progress was progress. JC was glad that LXC was making some, even if his pace was slow.
Before becoming his editor, when he’d merely been a dedicated fan, JC had been… concerned about the author.
Both he and LXC knew they had a lot of work ahead of them. But, progress was progress. JC was glad that LXC was making some, even if his pace was slow.
Before becoming his editor, when he’d merely been a dedicated fan, JC had been… concerned about the author.
36.
But, it was only writer’s block. That was manageable.
Still, for LXC to have been in a slump for such a long time when it’d apparently never happened to him before… What had happened? Was he really OK?
But, it was only writer’s block. That was manageable.
Still, for LXC to have been in a slump for such a long time when it’d apparently never happened to him before… What had happened? Was he really OK?
37.
Thanks to JWY’s help, LH is able to start making progress on his novel again. He begins by carefully reviewing each of the editor’s many notes.
Thanks to JWY’s help, LH is able to start making progress on his novel again. He begins by carefully reviewing each of the editor’s many notes.
38.
He pushes aside his reservations and prior attachments and starts the formidable task of making revisions inspired by JWY’s comments, sometimes reaching out to the editor for clarification for certain points.
He pushes aside his reservations and prior attachments and starts the formidable task of making revisions inspired by JWY’s comments, sometimes reaching out to the editor for clarification for certain points.
39.
Once again, he’s struck by the keenness and quality of JWY’s insights. The high recommendation the editor had received was well-deserved indeed.
Once again, he’s struck by the keenness and quality of JWY’s insights. The high recommendation the editor had received was well-deserved indeed.
40.
Regretfully, LH is still only able to write a bit each week. Most days, he’s simply too exhausted. It’s become a common occurrence for him to realize hours had passed while he gazed out the window or stared at the same paragraph in a book he was trying to read.
Regretfully, LH is still only able to write a bit each week. Most days, he’s simply too exhausted. It’s become a common occurrence for him to realize hours had passed while he gazed out the window or stared at the same paragraph in a book he was trying to read.
41.
This can’t continue, he thinks. So, he decides to try out the advice JWY had given him a week ago. He picks out a fresh notebook from his stash and begins to sketch out a new plot idea.
This can’t continue, he thinks. So, he decides to try out the advice JWY had given him a week ago. He picks out a fresh notebook from his stash and begins to sketch out a new plot idea.
42.
It’s a little-known fact about him that, aside from the novels of LXC, LH also writes other novels on the side, usually between projects. They are purposefully different in tone and genre from his main novels,
It’s a little-known fact about him that, aside from the novels of LXC, LH also writes other novels on the side, usually between projects. They are purposefully different in tone and genre from his main novels,
43.
meant to refresh his mind after having completed a long novel project. He's never started one of these side projects while already working on a novel—he likes to maintain focus on one project at a time. However, focus isn’t coming to him this time, so he’ll give this a try.
meant to refresh his mind after having completed a long novel project. He's never started one of these side projects while already working on a novel—he likes to maintain focus on one project at a time. However, focus isn’t coming to him this time, so he’ll give this a try.
44.
After five days of this, LH finishes outlining and begins writing in earnest. The concept for the new story is a light-hearted, whimsical one—quite different from the novel he’s working on with JWY’s assistance. That train of thought prompts LH to send an email to his editor.
After five days of this, LH finishes outlining and begins writing in earnest. The concept for the new story is a light-hearted, whimsical one—quite different from the novel he’s working on with JWY’s assistance. That train of thought prompts LH to send an email to his editor.
45.
‘JWY,
Good afternoon! I wish to ask for some input about a writing project that is not the novel. Would Jiang Wanyin be free?
LXC’
‘JWY,
Good afternoon! I wish to ask for some input about a writing project that is not the novel. Would Jiang Wanyin be free?
LXC’
46.
Two hours later, LXC receives a response:
‘LXC,
Of course, as your editor I’m happy to assist with any writing project Lan Xichen has.
If it interests you, I’m able to respond more quickly to phone messages. My W*chat number is XXXXX.
JWY’
Two hours later, LXC receives a response:
‘LXC,
Of course, as your editor I’m happy to assist with any writing project Lan Xichen has.
If it interests you, I’m able to respond more quickly to phone messages. My W*chat number is XXXXX.
JWY’
47.
...
JC is curious when LXC reaches out to him about a different writing project.
10 minutes after he sends his reply, he receives a notification that he has a new contact on W*chat. Of course, it's LXC, who has what looks to be a photo of a rabbit as his profile picture.
...
JC is curious when LXC reaches out to him about a different writing project.
10 minutes after he sends his reply, he receives a notification that he has a new contact on W*chat. Of course, it's LXC, who has what looks to be a photo of a rabbit as his profile picture.
48.
LXC: ‘Hello, it’s Lan Xichen!”
JWY: ‘Lan Xichen, good afternoon.’
LXC: ‘Thank you again for agreeing to help me with my new project. I know it may seem a little out of the blue, but I’m trying Jiang Wanyin’s advice about turning my mind elsewhere.’
LXC: ‘Hello, it’s Lan Xichen!”
JWY: ‘Lan Xichen, good afternoon.’
LXC: ‘Thank you again for agreeing to help me with my new project. I know it may seem a little out of the blue, but I’m trying Jiang Wanyin’s advice about turning my mind elsewhere.’
49.
So LXC had decided to try out JC’s advice after all? That made him a little happy.
JWY: ‘Like I said, it’s no problem. What is your project?’
LXC: ‘It’s a new story which I plan to publish under my other name if I complete it.'
So LXC had decided to try out JC’s advice after all? That made him a little happy.
JWY: ‘Like I said, it’s no problem. What is your project?’
LXC: ‘It’s a new story which I plan to publish under my other name if I complete it.'
50.
JWY: ‘Other name?’
LXC: ‘Oh, you weren't informed? I also write under a different pseudonym. These works are a little more casual and self-indulgent, so I normally don’t need much editorial input beyond proofreading, but my previous editor helped me from time to time.’
JWY: ‘Other name?’
LXC: ‘Oh, you weren't informed? I also write under a different pseudonym. These works are a little more casual and self-indulgent, so I normally don’t need much editorial input beyond proofreading, but my previous editor helped me from time to time.’
51.
JWY: ‘I wasn’t aware. What is the pseudonym?’
LXC: ‘The name is a little embarrassing, but: Zewu Jun’
LXC: 'Ah, I'd appreciate it if you could keep this to yourself. Not many people know that it is me, and I would prefer to keep it that way.'
JWY: ‘I wasn’t aware. What is the pseudonym?’
LXC: ‘The name is a little embarrassing, but: Zewu Jun’
LXC: 'Ah, I'd appreciate it if you could keep this to yourself. Not many people know that it is me, and I would prefer to keep it that way.
'
52.
...
JC stares at his phone screen for several seconds. Is he reading it correctly? Lan Xichen is… Zewu Jun? Were the heavens laughing at him?
LXC: 'It's the pen name under which I've published stories of xianxia and danmei genres.'
...
JC stares at his phone screen for several seconds. Is he reading it correctly? Lan Xichen is… Zewu Jun? Were the heavens laughing at him?
LXC: 'It's the pen name under which I've published stories of xianxia and danmei genres.'
53.
Oh, JC is well aware of the sort of genres Zewu Jun writes. Because... ZWJ is the other author whose works he fell in love with, after stumbling on them 5 years ago. Tales of heart-throbbing romances, often set in richly-woven fantastical worlds,
Oh, JC is well aware of the sort of genres Zewu Jun writes. Because... ZWJ is the other author whose works he fell in love with, after stumbling on them 5 years ago. Tales of heart-throbbing romances, often set in richly-woven fantastical worlds,
54.
which JC would indulge in when he needed a pick-me-up.
And now, he's finding out that the person who wrote those was the same man whose literary novels he's read cover to back? You have got to be kidding him. Is LXC his goddamn soulmate or something??
which JC would indulge in when he needed a pick-me-up.
And now, he's finding out that the person who wrote those was the same man whose literary novels he's read cover to back? You have got to be kidding him. Is LXC his goddamn soulmate or something??
55.
Head spinning, JC belatedly realizes he should reply to LXC.
JWY: 'Of course, I'll keep it confidential.'
LXC: ‘Thank you, I appreciate it!’
Head spinning, JC belatedly realizes he should reply to LXC.
JWY: 'Of course, I'll keep it confidential.'
LXC: ‘Thank you, I appreciate it!
’
56.
LXC: ‘Anyway, I’m planning for this one to be a xianxia genre short novel with a central romance plot. I’ll email you a brief outline. I would greatly appreciate Jiang Wanyin’s opinion. Thank you again!’
JWY: ‘It’s no problem.’
LXC: ‘Anyway, I’m planning for this one to be a xianxia genre short novel with a central romance plot. I’ll email you a brief outline. I would greatly appreciate Jiang Wanyin’s opinion.
Thank you again!’JWY: ‘It’s no problem.’
57.
LH isn’t sure why, but he’s quite excited to get JWY’s opinion on his short novel. It's a little atypical of him to seek his editor’s feedback so early on for a ZWJ’s story, but LH always looks forward to JWY's opinions, which never fail to be thoughtful and candid.
LH isn’t sure why, but he’s quite excited to get JWY’s opinion on his short novel. It's a little atypical of him to seek his editor’s feedback so early on for a ZWJ’s story, but LH always looks forward to JWY's opinions, which never fail to be thoughtful and candid.
58.
With that in mind, LH types up his story outline and sends an email off to JWY before setting his work aside to prepare a light dinner in the— frankly underused— behemoth of a kitchen in his spacious home.
With that in mind, LH types up his story outline and sends an email off to JWY before setting his work aside to prepare a light dinner in the— frankly underused— behemoth of a kitchen in his spacious home.
59.
After he eats, he washes the dishes and pots, then sweeps the floor, puts away the clean laundry, tidies his work space, replies to a few emails, and, for good measure, reorganizes all four of his bookshelves.
After he eats, he washes the dishes and pots, then sweeps the floor, puts away the clean laundry, tidies his work space, replies to a few emails, and, for good measure, reorganizes all four of his bookshelves.
60.
Finally, he acknowledges that he’s put it off long enough and, somewhat guiltily, once more pulls up his original novel manuscript.
He’s managed to make a bit more progress on it these past several weeks but he’s currently stuck on the climax,
Finally, he acknowledges that he’s put it off long enough and, somewhat guiltily, once more pulls up his original novel manuscript.
He’s managed to make a bit more progress on it these past several weeks but he’s currently stuck on the climax,
61.
when a mercenary working for the scheming ministers of the imperial city is sent to assassinate the royal family, only to clash unexpectedly with one of the emperor’s loyalists.
when a mercenary working for the scheming ministers of the imperial city is sent to assassinate the royal family, only to clash unexpectedly with one of the emperor’s loyalists.
62.
He stares blankly at his laptop screen for a good half hour before he slumps back in his seat with a sign and pinches the bridge of his nose.
He feels like he's missing something. But what?
He stares blankly at his laptop screen for a good half hour before he slumps back in his seat with a sign and pinches the bridge of his nose.
He feels like he's missing something. But what?
63.
Disheartened, he goes to the kitchen again to brew himself a pot of tea. He prepares a kettle of water to boil before selecting a canister of green tea from his shelf, scooping some of the leaves into a teapot.
Disheartened, he goes to the kitchen again to brew himself a pot of tea. He prepares a kettle of water to boil before selecting a canister of green tea from his shelf, scooping some of the leaves into a teapot.
64.
Absently, he looks out the window to the pale branches of the magnolia trees in the twilight.
A few years ago, if he found himself dejected he'd video call Mingjue or A-Yao, or the both of them, and that'd be enough to lift his spirits.
That's no longer a possibility, now.
Absently, he looks out the window to the pale branches of the magnolia trees in the twilight.
A few years ago, if he found himself dejected he'd video call Mingjue or A-Yao, or the both of them, and that'd be enough to lift his spirits.
That's no longer a possibility, now.
65.
The kettle beeps, startling him slightly. He allows the water to cool somewhat before pouring it into the pot, watching the loose leaves swirl within.
Once, they three had been immeasurably close—Mingjue, A-Yao, and him.
The kettle beeps, startling him slightly. He allows the water to cool somewhat before pouring it into the pot, watching the loose leaves swirl within.
Once, they three had been immeasurably close—Mingjue, A-Yao, and him.
66.
Then, at some point, the relationship between the other two soured, initially stemming from business-related reasons. Resentment took root between his two dearest friends, festering as time went on, and LH had been none the wiser.
Then, at some point, the relationship between the other two soured, initially stemming from business-related reasons. Resentment took root between his two dearest friends, festering as time went on, and LH had been none the wiser.
67.
No—that isn’t true. LH long suspected something was amiss. But, he chose to believe in the strength of their decades-long bond. To believe that they’d surely be able to mend whatever rift had opened between them.
No—that isn’t true. LH long suspected something was amiss. But, he chose to believe in the strength of their decades-long bond. To believe that they’d surely be able to mend whatever rift had opened between them.
68.
But, perhaps in doing so he alienated himself from the both of them instead.
His impartiality backfired. NMJ became convinced that LH had taken MY’s side, that MY turned LH against him, and MY took advantage of that even as he begrudged LH for not doing enough to defend him.
But, perhaps in doing so he alienated himself from the both of them instead.
His impartiality backfired. NMJ became convinced that LH had taken MY’s side, that MY turned LH against him, and MY took advantage of that even as he begrudged LH for not doing enough to defend him.
69.
Without his intention, LH became yet another wedge driven between them.
Toward the end, they never met up as a trio. It was always LH and one of them. LH’s reclusive habits didn’t help, either, especially since he’d been engrossed with working on his novel at the time.
Without his intention, LH became yet another wedge driven between them.
Toward the end, they never met up as a trio. It was always LH and one of them. LH’s reclusive habits didn’t help, either, especially since he’d been engrossed with working on his novel at the time.
70.
That resentment burgeoned until it eclipsed all else, culminating in one final, explosive argument. By then, LH finally realized, it was far too late to hope to salvage what remained of their friendship.
Was it his fault? Was there something he could’ve done?
Undoubtedly.
That resentment burgeoned until it eclipsed all else, culminating in one final, explosive argument. By then, LH finally realized, it was far too late to hope to salvage what remained of their friendship.
Was it his fault? Was there something he could’ve done?
Undoubtedly.
71.
Before he realizes it, the water in his teapot has gone cool and bitter, the leaves well oversteeped. With a sigh, he empties everything out and restarts the process.
He doesn’t get around to working on his novel that night.
Before he realizes it, the water in his teapot has gone cool and bitter, the leaves well oversteeped. With a sigh, he empties everything out and restarts the process.
He doesn’t get around to working on his novel that night.
72.
...
Upon receiving the LXC's email with the notes for ZJW’s new story, JC can’t tamp down the tiny frisson of excitement, but he does compose himself swiftly to get to work. His friends have dubbed it his ‘scary editor mode’, which is ridiculous. It's simply concentration.
...
Upon receiving the LXC's email with the notes for ZJW’s new story, JC can’t tamp down the tiny frisson of excitement, but he does compose himself swiftly to get to work. His friends have dubbed it his ‘scary editor mode’, which is ridiculous. It's simply concentration.
73.
‘LXC,
I took a quick look over the short novel outline you sent me. I think it would benefit from a longer exposition. The conflict seems oversimplified at this point; needs fleshing out. Furthermore, based on your notes, the romance comes off as somewhat one-sided so far.
‘LXC,
I took a quick look over the short novel outline you sent me. I think it would benefit from a longer exposition. The conflict seems oversimplified at this point; needs fleshing out. Furthermore, based on your notes, the romance comes off as somewhat one-sided so far.
74.
I’ve left additional notes in the manuscript itself.
I look forward to reading this in its more completed stages.
I’m glad to see you writing again.
JWY’
I’ve left additional notes in the manuscript itself.
I look forward to reading this in its more completed stages.
I’m glad to see you writing again.
JWY’
75.
Before he can doubt himself, he hits ‘send’, then stares at the last two lines in the message window. Such personal remarks are uncharacteristic of him. But, without conscious thought, they'd slipped out.
Before he can doubt himself, he hits ‘send’, then stares at the last two lines in the message window. Such personal remarks are uncharacteristic of him. But, without conscious thought, they'd slipped out.
76.
He tells himself it’s alright. Being in a writer’s block and all, LXC might even appreciate the encouragement.
He’s overthinking this, JC tells himself, inwardly rolling his eyes at his own foolishness. What the hell is he so nervous for?
He tells himself it’s alright. Being in a writer’s block and all, LXC might even appreciate the encouragement.
He’s overthinking this, JC tells himself, inwardly rolling his eyes at his own foolishness. What the hell is he so nervous for?
77.
LXC: ‘Jiang Wanyin, thank you for looking over my short story notes. I also look forward to having you read it when it is in a more finished state.’
JWY: ‘Sure. But no need to rush it.’
LXC: ‘I won't. Thank you for your concern!’
LXC: ‘Jiang Wanyin, thank you for looking over my short story notes. I also look forward to having you read it when it is in a more finished state.
’JWY: ‘Sure. But no need to rush it.’
LXC: ‘I won't. Thank you for your concern!
’
78.
Gradually, LH gets back into the flow of writing. Finding that it comes more easily for him, he spends more time working on the new short ZWJ story than his original novel. Still, his guilty conscience drives him to work on that, too.
Gradually, LH gets back into the flow of writing. Finding that it comes more easily for him, he spends more time working on the new short ZWJ story than his original novel. Still, his guilty conscience drives him to work on that, too.
79.
He’s already dragged his feet with it for this long. LH has always considered himself a disciplined man; this is the first time he has been so reluctant in this manner.
It’s a wonder that JWY hasn’t lost his patience with him yet.
He’s already dragged his feet with it for this long. LH has always considered himself a disciplined man; this is the first time he has been so reluctant in this manner.
It’s a wonder that JWY hasn’t lost his patience with him yet.
80.
A part of him knows that, if it is giving him this much trouble, he can always abandon the novel and start afresh. Yet, for some reason he can’t bring himself to do so. It weighs on him daily, the thought always at the back of his mind: he has to finish this novel. He must.
A part of him knows that, if it is giving him this much trouble, he can always abandon the novel and start afresh. Yet, for some reason he can’t bring himself to do so. It weighs on him daily, the thought always at the back of his mind: he has to finish this novel. He must.
81.
And so, he forces himself to write, falling back—at last—into the habitual routine he has whenever he gets deep into writing mode. He writes from dawn to evening, taking breaks only to stretch and to eat.
And so, he forces himself to write, falling back—at last—into the habitual routine he has whenever he gets deep into writing mode. He writes from dawn to evening, taking breaks only to stretch and to eat.
82.
His increasingly frequent interactions with his editor help, and, if he’s being honest, the rare genuine compliments he receives from the difficult-to-impress JWY motivate him all the more intensely.
His increasingly frequent interactions with his editor help, and, if he’s being honest, the rare genuine compliments he receives from the difficult-to-impress JWY motivate him all the more intensely.
83.
Although he appreciated his previous editor very much, LH has found himself looking forward to hearing back from JWY in a way he never has with other editors.
Although he appreciated his previous editor very much, LH has found himself looking forward to hearing back from JWY in a way he never has with other editors.
84.
A week of this goes by, then two, then stretches on to three. Four weeks later, LH rakes critical eyes over his latest pages one more time before, with a sigh, he sends an email to JWY and allows himself to slump back in his seat.
A week of this goes by, then two, then stretches on to three. Four weeks later, LH rakes critical eyes over his latest pages one more time before, with a sigh, he sends an email to JWY and allows himself to slump back in his seat.
85.
LXC: ‘Jiang Wanyin, I just sent you an email with materials to look over. Although it’s yet in unsatisfactory condition, I humbly request your feedback. Looking forward to your reply.'
LXC: ‘Jiang Wanyin, I just sent you an email with materials to look over. Although it’s yet in unsatisfactory condition, I humbly request your feedback. Looking forward to your reply.'
86.
...
Upon opening the email, JC pauses for a moment in surprise. It’s the completed manuscript of LXC’s original novel. It seems that LXC was able finish writing the rest of it in the span of a month.
...
Upon opening the email, JC pauses for a moment in surprise. It’s the completed manuscript of LXC’s original novel. It seems that LXC was able finish writing the rest of it in the span of a month.
87.
Of course, the work is far from over—JC expects numerous rounds of revisions to come—but this is remarkable progress.
Does this mean LXC has broken out of his slump?
Of course, the work is far from over—JC expects numerous rounds of revisions to come—but this is remarkable progress.
Does this mean LXC has broken out of his slump?
88.
Taking a breath to rein in his excitement, JC settles down, clicks open the manuscript, and starts to read.
First, he allows himself to simply appreciate LXC’s writing. Even from this unpolished draft, it’s obvious that the man truly is a master of prose.
Taking a breath to rein in his excitement, JC settles down, clicks open the manuscript, and starts to read.
First, he allows himself to simply appreciate LXC’s writing. Even from this unpolished draft, it’s obvious that the man truly is a master of prose.
89.
His artistry with words is brilliant, and his story-crafting lush and riveting. JC spends several hours reading the entire manuscript in one go, unconscious of the shifting of daylight and shadows outside until he’s forced to turn on the lights to continue.
His artistry with words is brilliant, and his story-crafting lush and riveting. JC spends several hours reading the entire manuscript in one go, unconscious of the shifting of daylight and shadows outside until he’s forced to turn on the lights to continue.
90.
He re-reads the novel, then again, focusing on different aspects of it each time. Here and there, he marks down notes about pacing, about minor inconsistencies, about structure. Within a period of three days, JC has read the manuscript in its entirety several times over.
He re-reads the novel, then again, focusing on different aspects of it each time. Here and there, he marks down notes about pacing, about minor inconsistencies, about structure. Within a period of three days, JC has read the manuscript in its entirety several times over.
91.
It's undeniably a well-written novel—JC would expect no less from the venerated author. But, as someone who has thoroughly read every one of LXC’s novels, JC gets the sense that something's a little off.
Something is missing.
It's undeniably a well-written novel—JC would expect no less from the venerated author. But, as someone who has thoroughly read every one of LXC’s novels, JC gets the sense that something's a little off.
Something is missing.
92.
JC compiles the feedback he has so far and sends it back to LXC, then proceeds to listlessly and uselessly pace about his apartment. He can’t quite place a finger on what feels strange about the novel. Perhaps it’s simply that it’s still an unrefined draft?
JC compiles the feedback he has so far and sends it back to LXC, then proceeds to listlessly and uselessly pace about his apartment. He can’t quite place a finger on what feels strange about the novel. Perhaps it’s simply that it’s still an unrefined draft?
93.
He opens the manuscript again, re-reading each line carefully as if the now-familiar characters will deign to reveal to him their secret truth.
He opens the manuscript again, re-reading each line carefully as if the now-familiar characters will deign to reveal to him their secret truth.
94.
Eventually, he gives up and lets himself be dragged out that evening by his siblings, when he spends the entire length of dinner being half-distracted by the conundrum of LXC’s novel.
Eventually, he gives up and lets himself be dragged out that evening by his siblings, when he spends the entire length of dinner being half-distracted by the conundrum of LXC’s novel.
95.
It’s not until two days later, as JC is idly flipping through some of LXC’s old novels on his bookshelf, that it suddenly hits him.
Immediately, JC grabs for his phone, rushing to open the W*chat app and tap on a familiar profile icon before bringing the phone up to his ear.
It’s not until two days later, as JC is idly flipping through some of LXC’s old novels on his bookshelf, that it suddenly hits him.
Immediately, JC grabs for his phone, rushing to open the W*chat app and tap on a familiar profile icon before bringing the phone up to his ear.
96.
The ringtone sounds once, then twice, and JC has a moment to think ‘shit, what if LXC isn’t there?’ when the call connects and a low, questioning voice—LXC’s voice—says:
“Hello? Jiang Wanyin?”
“Lan Xichen,” JC says, “I figured it out!”
The ringtone sounds once, then twice, and JC has a moment to think ‘shit, what if LXC isn’t there?’ when the call connects and a low, questioning voice—LXC’s voice—says:
“Hello? Jiang Wanyin?”
“Lan Xichen,” JC says, “I figured it out!”
97.
LXC sounds confused. “What did you figure out?”
“What’s wrong with your novel!” JC exclaims.
If LXC were a lesser man, he probably would’ve been offended at that. However, his tone is merely intrigued when he replies, “In that case, Jiang Wanyin, please, do tell me.”
LXC sounds confused. “What did you figure out?”
“What’s wrong with your novel!” JC exclaims.
If LXC were a lesser man, he probably would’ve been offended at that. However, his tone is merely intrigued when he replies, “In that case, Jiang Wanyin, please, do tell me.”
98.
All of LCX’s stories, JC has come to realize, have some sort of message of hope embedded within them. That’s not to say they are all happy. LXC’s novels range from uplifting, mournful, exciting, to deeply introspective,
All of LCX’s stories, JC has come to realize, have some sort of message of hope embedded within them. That’s not to say they are all happy. LXC’s novels range from uplifting, mournful, exciting, to deeply introspective,
99.
with endings that are joyful, melancholic, triumphant, ambiguous, grim... But always profoundly satisfying and inspiring.
Skimming through LXC's old novels reminded JC that this fact is what subconsciously drew him to LXC’s works all those years ago, and all the years since.
with endings that are joyful, melancholic, triumphant, ambiguous, grim... But always profoundly satisfying and inspiring.
Skimming through LXC's old novels reminded JC that this fact is what subconsciously drew him to LXC’s works all those years ago, and all the years since.
100.
And that is what’s lacking so far in this novel, which feels bleak in comparison.
JC isn’t an advocate for happy endings for the sake of happy endings but this feels different from LXC’s other works in a way that’s jarringly unlike him.
And that is what’s lacking so far in this novel, which feels bleak in comparison.
JC isn’t an advocate for happy endings for the sake of happy endings but this feels different from LXC’s other works in a way that’s jarringly unlike him.
101.
The novel's characters toil in a tumultuous political landscape to a backdrop of war and upheaval. Yet, it’s difficult to feel for any of them, each one a wretched product of their own tragic mistakes and flawed decisions, which they bear like a yoke.
The novel's characters toil in a tumultuous political landscape to a backdrop of war and upheaval. Yet, it’s difficult to feel for any of them, each one a wretched product of their own tragic mistakes and flawed decisions, which they bear like a yoke.
102.
None of their intentions truly resonate nor inspire. And, in particular—
"The character of the Emperor," he says to LXC over the phone.
"What about him?"
None of their intentions truly resonate nor inspire. And, in particular—
"The character of the Emperor," he says to LXC over the phone.
"What about him?"
103.
"He’s central to the story," JC says, "yet, you go into depth about the motives that the characters around him have, but not his. His character feels hollow in comparison. I think he would benefit from being more multidimensional rather than just a villainized figurehead."
"He’s central to the story," JC says, "yet, you go into depth about the motives that the characters around him have, but not his. His character feels hollow in comparison. I think he would benefit from being more multidimensional rather than just a villainized figurehead."
104.
“Hm, I can see where you're coming from," LXC answers. But I believe what is more important to the story are those around the emperor who are affected by his actions, so I chose to focus on them, instead.”
“Hm, I can see where you're coming from," LXC answers. But I believe what is more important to the story are those around the emperor who are affected by his actions, so I chose to focus on them, instead.”
105.
“They’re so strongly motivated against him, yet the reader doesn’t get to see the Emperor’s side of the story,” JC argues. “And why does he allow himself to be tread on by his own court?”
"Because he feels guilt over his decisions and their consequences," LXC replies.
“They’re so strongly motivated against him, yet the reader doesn’t get to see the Emperor’s side of the story,” JC argues. “And why does he allow himself to be tread on by his own court?”
"Because he feels guilt over his decisions and their consequences," LXC replies.
106.
"So he'll just let himself be manipulated and murdered? I think he deserves to have his point of view at least be explored.”
“I’m not certain that would add value to the narrative, though. He’s a rather pitiful character, and not exactly sympathizable.”
"So he'll just let himself be manipulated and murdered? I think he deserves to have his point of view at least be explored.”
“I’m not certain that would add value to the narrative, though. He’s a rather pitiful character, and not exactly sympathizable.”
107.
“If the Emperor feels regret for his own actions and negligence, doesn’t that make him all the more redeemable?”
"..."
“I for one think I could sympathize with the emperor, despite his mistakes,” JC presses. “He, too, is a victim of the circumstances.”
“If the Emperor feels regret for his own actions and negligence, doesn’t that make him all the more redeemable?”
"..."
“I for one think I could sympathize with the emperor, despite his mistakes,” JC presses. “He, too, is a victim of the circumstances.”
108.
“...”
The silence from the other end of the phone makes JC pause. "... Lan Xichen? …. Hello, are you still there? … Lan-laoshi?"
"I'm here," LXC's voice finally replies. "Sorry. Thank you for your opinion."
“...”
The silence from the other end of the phone makes JC pause. "... Lan Xichen? …. Hello, are you still there? … Lan-laoshi?"
"I'm here," LXC's voice finally replies. "Sorry. Thank you for your opinion."
109.
The author sounds distant, almost stilted. In the lull, the weight of the conversation they just had catches up to JC and he suddenly feels awkward.
“I apologize if I was too pushy," he says. "But, please consider my opinion. Um, that’s all I had to say, so. Goodbye.”
The author sounds distant, almost stilted. In the lull, the weight of the conversation they just had catches up to JC and he suddenly feels awkward.
“I apologize if I was too pushy," he says. "But, please consider my opinion. Um, that’s all I had to say, so. Goodbye.”
110.
JC hangs up before the other man can respond, feeling somewhat shaky. He’s left staring at the chat screen with their past messages.
He doesn’t regret telling LXC what he did, but… did he go too far this time?
JC hangs up before the other man can respond, feeling somewhat shaky. He’s left staring at the chat screen with their past messages.
He doesn’t regret telling LXC what he did, but… did he go too far this time?
111.
At the other end of the now-disconnected line, LH lowers the phone from his ear as well. He didn’t mean to make JWY hang up; he hopes the editor hadn't been offended by his speechlessness.
At the other end of the now-disconnected line, LH lowers the phone from his ear as well. He didn’t mean to make JWY hang up; he hopes the editor hadn't been offended by his speechlessness.
112.
It was simply that LH found himself shaken by the things JWY told him about his manuscript in that direct, enthusiastic rush of words.
Because... because, well, those words struck a completely unexpected note within LH, for which he'd been entirely unprepared.
It was simply that LH found himself shaken by the things JWY told him about his manuscript in that direct, enthusiastic rush of words.
Because... because, well, those words struck a completely unexpected note within LH, for which he'd been entirely unprepared.
113.
His gaze lands on the notebook containing his notes for his novel sitting innocently on his writing desk. Picking it up, he flips through the pages.
What JWY stated about the grimness of the novel, about the character of the Emperor, about guilt, remorse, redemption...
His gaze lands on the notebook containing his notes for his novel sitting innocently on his writing desk. Picking it up, he flips through the pages.
What JWY stated about the grimness of the novel, about the character of the Emperor, about guilt, remorse, redemption...
114.
LH shakes his head and lets out an inaudible huff of laughter, wry and rueful. He’s really done it, hasn’t he?
His writing has always been personal to him. Like many other authors, he draws from his own experiences and emotions to bring words onto paper and to life.
LH shakes his head and lets out an inaudible huff of laughter, wry and rueful. He’s really done it, hasn’t he?
His writing has always been personal to him. Like many other authors, he draws from his own experiences and emotions to bring words onto paper and to life.
115.
But, to think that he’s gone and poured his emotional tumult into his novel in such a bald manner without realizing it.
And it was his own editor who noticed something was wrong, although he doubts JWY knows the full extent of his realizations.
But, to think that he’s gone and poured his emotional tumult into his novel in such a bald manner without realizing it.
And it was his own editor who noticed something was wrong, although he doubts JWY knows the full extent of his realizations.
116.
LH thumbs over a well-used page one last time before setting the notebook back down.
That editor, Jiang Wanyin...
What a remarkable man.
LH thumbs over a well-used page one last time before setting the notebook back down.
That editor, Jiang Wanyin...
What a remarkable man.
117.
LXC: ‘Jiang Wanyin, I apologize that I was unable to thank you again for your feedback during our phone call. I truly appreciate it.’
JWY: ‘Lan Xichen, I apologize for hanging up so abruptly. I didn’t mean to offend.’
LXC: ‘Jiang Wanyin, I apologize that I was unable to thank you again for your feedback during our phone call. I truly appreciate it.’
JWY: ‘Lan Xichen, I apologize for hanging up so abruptly. I didn’t mean to offend.’
118.
LXC: ‘Jiang Wanyin did not, don’t worry. I think I know what I must do next. I will send you my revisions when I complete them.’
LXC: ‘I sincerely hope it will measure up to Jiang Wanyin’s standards.’
LXC: ‘Jiang Wanyin did not, don’t worry. I think I know what I must do next. I will send you my revisions when I complete them.’
LXC: ‘I sincerely hope it will measure up to Jiang Wanyin’s standards.
’
119.
JWY: ‘Don’t worry about that. Just focus on writing something with which you yourself are happy.’
LXC: ‘It makes me happy to get Jiang Wanyin's approval.’
JWY: ‘Don’t worry about that. Just focus on writing something with which you yourself are happy.’
LXC: ‘It makes me happy to get Jiang Wanyin's approval.
’
120.
It takes LH another ten days to revise his manuscript again, this time without the lingering dissatisfaction that he’s had for too long. After nearly 19 long months, his novel is finally close to completion, he just knows it.
He’s sure Jiang Wanyin will be satisfied too.
It takes LH another ten days to revise his manuscript again, this time without the lingering dissatisfaction that he’s had for too long. After nearly 19 long months, his novel is finally close to completion, he just knows it.
He’s sure Jiang Wanyin will be satisfied too.
121.
—
‘Jiang Wanyin,
Please find attached my revised, and final, manuscript. I would deeply appreciate Jiang Wanyin’s honest consideration once more.
I’ve decided on a title as well: “Dragon in the Ice”.
As always, I look forward to hearing back from you.
LXC’
—
—
‘Jiang Wanyin,
Please find attached my revised, and final, manuscript. I would deeply appreciate Jiang Wanyin’s honest consideration once more.
I’ve decided on a title as well: “Dragon in the Ice”.
As always, I look forward to hearing back from you.
LXC’
—
122.
—
‘Lan Xichen,
Here are my final comments for the manuscript for 'Dragon in the Ice'. Merely some line edits.
I will be in contact with you soon regarding the publishing and printing timeline.
Jiang Wanyin’
—
—
‘Lan Xichen,
Here are my final comments for the manuscript for 'Dragon in the Ice'. Merely some line edits.
I will be in contact with you soon regarding the publishing and printing timeline.
Jiang Wanyin’
—
123.
3 months later...
JWY: ‘Lan Xichen, congratulations on your nomination for the annual Excellence in Literature award.‘
JWY: ‘It’s well deserved.’
LXC: ‘Jiang Wanyin’s praise is too generous!'
3 months later...
JWY: ‘Lan Xichen, congratulations on your nomination for the annual Excellence in Literature award.‘
JWY: ‘It’s well deserved.’
LXC: ‘Jiang Wanyin’s praise is too generous!'
124.
LXC: 'It is thanks to the excellent skills of Jiang Wanyin that I was able to complete “Dragon in the Ice”!’
LXC: ‘Thank you again for your assistance these past months as well as your encouragement!’
JWY: 'You're welcome. It's my job, after all.'
LXC: 'It is thanks to the excellent skills of Jiang Wanyin that I was able to complete “Dragon in the Ice”!’
LXC: ‘Thank you again for your assistance these past months as well as your encouragement!
’JWY: 'You're welcome. It's my job, after all.'
125.
LXC: ‘This may be presumptuous, but will Jiang Wanyin be attending the awards ceremony?
LXC: ‘I don’t mean to impose, but if Jiang Wanyin has time this one would very much appreciate it.’
JWY: ‘If Lan Xichen requests it, as your editor I will of course be there.’
LXC: ‘This may be presumptuous, but will Jiang Wanyin be attending the awards ceremony?
LXC: ‘I don’t mean to impose, but if Jiang Wanyin has time this one would very much appreciate it.’
JWY: ‘If Lan Xichen requests it, as your editor I will of course be there.’
126.
JC fiddles subtly with his family ring on his index finger and resists the urge to adjust his collar for the umpteenth time as he waits for the awards proceedings to begin. Guests are still trickling in to fill the pristine white-clothed dinner tables.
JC fiddles subtly with his family ring on his index finger and resists the urge to adjust his collar for the umpteenth time as he waits for the awards proceedings to begin. Guests are still trickling in to fill the pristine white-clothed dinner tables.
127.
The annual Excellence in Literature award is one of the most prestigious literary honors and its awards ceremony reflects that: a fancy black tie event hosted in the restaurant of a five star hotel.
JC’s not used to these sorts of things, nor had he anticipated this.
The annual Excellence in Literature award is one of the most prestigious literary honors and its awards ceremony reflects that: a fancy black tie event hosted in the restaurant of a five star hotel.
JC’s not used to these sorts of things, nor had he anticipated this.
128.
What he's surprised by isn't the fact that LXC received the nomination despite his novel being newly-published. It certainly isn’t the first time the author has been nominated, or won, this particular award for one of his works.
What he's surprised by isn't the fact that LXC received the nomination despite his novel being newly-published. It certainly isn’t the first time the author has been nominated, or won, this particular award for one of his works.
129.
No, the strange part is that, despite having received many such accolades in the past, JC knows that this is the first ever public appearance for the reclusive LXC.
JC twists his ring again. Maybe LXC chose to attend this one because he struggled so with this novel?
No, the strange part is that, despite having received many such accolades in the past, JC knows that this is the first ever public appearance for the reclusive LXC.
JC twists his ring again. Maybe LXC chose to attend this one because he struggled so with this novel?
